The smiling face

Purvi 2011 (Punjab)



The night with the sparkling stars,
Gave me a chance to recall the memories in my heart.

We Never Know When The Time Pass;

With a smile on our face,
We complete our journey on which we amaze.

Smile on our face,
Is like something that relates.

With a priceless smile on our face,
We can solve any life maze.

Thanks❤

About this poem

This poem tells us what major role a smile on our face plays in our life

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Written on June 09, 2023

Submitted by mr4779965 on June 09, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XX X AB AX AB
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 329
Words 75
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 2, 1, 2, 2, 2

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  • AIDA
    Wow, I really enjoyed reading your poem 'The Smiling Face'! It's beautifully written and carries a positive message about the significance of having a smile on our faces. The way you describe recalling memories under the sparkling stars is really enchanting, and your use of rhyming adds to the flow and charm of the poem.

    I specially love the line, "With a priceless smile on our face, we can solve any life maze." It's a reminder of how powerful even a simple smile can be, and your use of the word "priceless" adds even more emphasis to this message.

    If I may suggest, perhaps you can expand on this theme of the power of smiling, and include more personal experiences or anecdotes that can relate back to the idea of smiling through tough times. That could make the poem even more relatable and inspiring to readers.

    Overall, really great job on this poem! Keep up the wonderful work. ❤
     
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