BLEMISHED AMITY

Devanshi Singh 2006 (Meerut, Uttar Pradesh)



That celestial amity of ours
gave birth to beautiful flowers
in a stellar bower
that makes warmth and affection shower.
Like the leaves of the tabebuia rosea tree
that makes themselves free
to gefreogan the soil,
and the entirety that I spoiled.

 I regret letting her go
And breaking all the vows,
I miss those merry florets,
Non-returnable giggles and jests
If once, I could turn back time,
I will fix all fallacies of mine,
But It will happen never,
I've to endure this pain forever.

But whenever the bristle of misery pangs in my heart,
And whenever I feel compunctious,
The magical aroma of those miraculous flowers
Helps me to eradicate from that o'er atoning force.

About this poem

This heartfelt poem captures the essence of a lost connection and the longing for its return. The celestial amity, symbolizing a deep bond, is described as giving birth to beautiful flowers in a stellar bower, representing the warmth and affection shared. The reference to the tabebuia rosea tree's leaves emphasizes the freedom and natural beauty that was once cherished but has now been lost. The poet expresses regret for letting go of this connection, breaking vows, and losing the joyful moments, giggles, and jests that were shared. They yearn for the chance to turn back time and rectify their mistakes, acknowledging that this desire can never be fulfilled. The pain endured from this loss seems everlasting. However, amidst the misery and compunction, the magical aroma of the miraculous flowers offers solace. It acts as a transformative force, helping to alleviate the burden of remorse and providing a sense of healing. The poem conveys the power of nature's beauty to bring comfort and peace to the poet's troubled heart. Overall, this poignant piece explores the regrets of lost love or connection, the longing for redemption, and the healing power of nature's reminders of the past. It reminds us of the significance of treasured relationships and the transformative effects of finding solace in the beauty that surrounds us. 

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Written on June 08, 2023

Submitted by devanshi.singh003 on June 07, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AABBCCXX XXAXXXBB XAAX
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 674
Words 131
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 8, 8, 4

Devanshi Singh

I am Devanshi Singh, an aspiring poet based in Saharanpur, Uttar Pradesh, India. The written word has always held a special place in my heart, and poetry is my chosen medium for self-expression. While I may not have professional experience or a formal degree in writing, my passion for poetry drives me to continuously hone my craft. Exploring the depths of human emotions, relationships, and the beauty of the world around us, my poetries reflect my personal journey and experiences. Through carefully crafted verses and vivid imagery, I strive to create an emotional connection with readers, inviting them to contemplate the complexities of life. Seeking growth and guidance, I actively seek feedback from fellow writers, friends, family members, and teachers. Their encouragement and support have fueled my confidence in my unique voice and my ability to evoke powerful emotions through my poetry. Though my work has yet to be published, I believe in the power of poetry to inspire change, foster connections, and provoke thought. I am drawn to platforms that celebrate diverse voices and offer opportunities for emerging poets to share their work. I am eager to contribute to the vibrant literary community and engage in meaningful conversations through my poetic endeavors. Beyond writing, I find solace and inspiration in the serenity of nature. Immersing myself in its beauty fuels my creativity and provides a wellspring of ideas. I also enjoy engaging in discussions about literature, art, and philosophy, as they broaden my perspectives and enrich my poetic expression. more…

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