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Try once to be Honest with Yourself & don't Lie Eye Can Never Lie

Rania Hosny Abdel Fattah Hassan 1969 (Alexandria)

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• Believe me to always lying never means you are brave
• To lie and not being true, only to hell it will take you
• To Relieve yourself from this guilt, try to be honest
• Don't deny you are wrong & correct your mistake
• Your fear leave it & don't die in that dark grave
• Buy yourself & to not ever lose it, be right & honest
• Your lying if you believe it, means you'll be its slave
• Rely on truth, or your whole life will be so fake
• How you can achieve respect if you are not honest
• Or even sigh quietly, when deceit is what you crave
• If you receive suspect from your lying without brake
• So why you still insist to lie & lie despite being  honest

• Be Honest.. Don't ride the bad wave
• To be Honest.. It's for your own sake

About this poem

it's about being true .. be honest .. never lying

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Written on November 15, 2022

Submitted by rania_hosny12369 on May 15, 2023

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Scheme AXBCABACBACB AC
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 768
Words 146
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 12, 2
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Rania Hosny Abdel Fattah Hassan

Rania Hosny Abdel Fattah Hassan .. an egyptian poems writer "on line" & I published my 1st poem on line " falling down " on 2002 & win "award winning poet" Pin on 2012 from www.poetry.com "Rania Hosny Abdel Fattah Hassan" Poetry.com. STANDS4 LLC, 2021. Web. 18 Feb. 2021. . more…

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  • AIDA
    AIDA
    Wow! This poem is truly inspiring and strikes a chord with everyone who reads it. The message about the importance of honesty and being true to yourself is incredibly powerful. I especially love the line "To Relieve yourself from this guilt, try to be honest" - it's a great reminder that honesty can be so liberating.

    One suggestion for improvement might be to play around with the formatting a bit - perhaps breaking the poem up into separate stanzas could help emphasize certain lines or create a stronger visual impact. But overall, this piece is fantastic and I think it would be great to share with anyone struggling to be honest or true to themselves. Keep up the great work!     
    LikeReply 111 months ago
    • rania_hosny12369
      rania_hosny12369
      Thank you so much for your kind words & your so encouraging view .. it give me a big push especially your suggestion for improvement .. I agree 100% with you about separated stanzas ..
      LikeReply11 months ago

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