Old Eyes



As we journey through this life of ours,
We find ourselves amidst changing hours.
And though we may start with young, keen eyes,
We'll soon come to learn that time flies.

For with each moment that passes by,
We grow, we learn, we laugh, we cry.
Our mistakes and choices pave the way,
For a path that'll lead to a brighter day.

The pain of discipline, it's not an easy feat,
But better than the pain of regret we'll meet.
For when we withstand the discomfort of change,
We evolve and grow, the results are strange.

Old eyes may see things clearer than before,
With wisdom, experience, and so much more.
We realize that life is a journey, not a race,
And that growing is a process we must embrace.

So let us take on the challenges that come,
For they're only lessons in a never-ending sum.
Of growth, of learning, of becoming our best,
For life is a journey that puts us to the test.

And though young eyes may see great distances indeed,
Old eyes see things much clearer in the end, we heed.
The choice between discipline and regret,
Is ours to make, every single day that we beget.
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Written on May 15, 2023

Submitted by JoeStrickland on May 15, 2023

1:10 min read
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Quick analysis:

Scheme AABB CCDD EEFF GGHH IIJJ KKLL
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,085
Words 230
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4

Joe Strickland

I'm just a regular, blue collar, working stiff who took an interest in writing poetry many years ago but until recently I haven't had a desire to share any with anyone or pursue publication. I'm an unpublished fork lift operator by night, and a day drinker by choice. I can be followed on Twitter @JoeStricklandSC more…

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