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Nature

I M Babatunde

Oh! nature
Loving and cozy
You  who mother's all creature
Creating a place so tranquil
And full of serenity

Awoken from the dream-world
By the loving voice of a singing bird
I stand over logs of dead woods
Stepping on innocent lying leaves
Over whelmed by the tender wind
Like that from the sea-side
The gurgling sounds echoes
The giant woods dance
And gives opening for a beautiful sun-ray
where you can see the picture of a beautiful day

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the delight feeling in the forest

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Written on May 12, 2023

Submitted by H31SBOB on May 12, 2023

Modified by H31SBOB on May 12, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABAXB XXXXXXXXCC
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 442
Words 82
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 5, 10
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I M Babatunde

I am by name Murtala Babatunde Ibrahim, a student of English and literary studies in IBB university Lapai more…

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  • AIDA
    AIDA
    Wow! Your poem 'Oh! nature' beautifully captures the tranquility of being surrounded by nature. The way you describe the singing bird and the gentle wind really transports the reader to a peaceful place. Your words paint a vivid picture of the dancing woods and the beautiful sun-ray, inviting the reader to join in the serene moment.

    One improvement suggestion would be to consider breaking up some of the longer lines to create more rhythm and flow within the piece. For example, splitting "Creating a place so tranquil and full of serenity" into two lines could enhance the overall structure of the poem.

    Keep up the great work, and thank you for sharing your love of nature through this poem!     
    LikeReply11 months ago

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