Elusive Love



Love is like a rainbow
without its pot of gold.
Though impossible to grasp it,
It’s lovely to behold.

Love is like a vapor
a wispy, filmy cloud.
In vain I seek to hold it,
so pristine, pure, and proud.

Love is like a fountain,
a splashing, sparkling stream.
To contain it is to change it.
Love’s an elusive dream.

Love is like tomorrow,
lending promise to today,
enticing and alluring,
yet just a step away.

Love is like a sunbeam
dancing on a wave.
An effort to embrace it
could mean a watery grave.
 
A rainbow or a sunbeam
a fountain or a stream,
the promise of tomorrow,
a vapor, cloud, or dream,

cannot be held or bottled.
Like love, they must be free.
When unconfined, their beauty
shines forth for all to see.

About this poem

I wrote this poem many years ago as a young woman recently jilted, or perhaps, pursuing a love that could not be.

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Submitted by janet_1 on March 04, 2023

Modified on April 09, 2023

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Scheme ABCB XDCD XECE AFXF EGCG EEAE XHHH
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Words 164
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4

Janet Muirhead Hill

 · 1942 · Colorado

Janet Muirhead Hill is a novelist who occasionally writes poetry for fun and for self-expression. Her published books include the Miranda and Starlight series of horse stories for middle-grade readers and other fiction. more…

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