Blazer



The hot sun that burns inside of my soul
Yearns to fuse with a bright star like yourself
Burn baby, light up my starry night sky

My body gravitates to your hot flames
My head spins because my heart orbits yours
My brain fills with gas it might just explode
I am getting cold without my star girl
I miss you so much, where did the warmth go?

Scorch, scorch, my scorn
Burn me down burn me down
Incinerate my doubts through your deceit
More than one love made the connection weak
Last night you told me you want to be mine
As you held my hand under the night sky
Look me in my eyes
Do you know I see your lies?

About this poem

This sonnet is an innocent, pure, beautiful love poem that quickly turns the other direction when the truth is revealed! No iambic pentameter.

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Written on March 31, 2023

Submitted by Ro$e on March 31, 2023

Modified by Ro$e on March 31, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XXA XXXXX XXXXXABB
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 609
Words 126
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 3, 5, 8

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