This is Lagos



Arriving that evening
through the window screen
I saw the sign
THIS IS LAGOS
And the hustle began

No slacking on this fast lane
Agbero yells in a raspy voice
No bus parking to wait for you
Here in Lagos
Passengers jump like monkeys
unto a moving bus

So where are they all hurrying to
All these quick feets
moving tro and fro Oshodi road
Like men without destination

Roadside hawkers in the midst
Pulling your hands and dragging your clothes
Even holding you by the neck
Hassling  you to buy their inferior goods

Pick-pockets pilfering under Ikeja bridge
putting holes in your pocket
My eyes have seen red today
My money is gone
my wallet stolen
I cried helplessly, hands on my head

  Are you JJC
A voice jeer from the corner
This is Lagos my friend
You better shine your eyes

From Opebi to Ojuelegba roundabout
ladies hustle in skimpy clothes
displaying their bodies for sale
All you see are not humans
Some are mermaids (mammy water)
So you better shine your eyes

Anything can happen in Afrikan shrine
Here, Freedom goes wild with Afro beats
Taken by the spirit of Fela
Smoking weed, open orgies
 All illegality are legalized in Kalakuta Republic
So you better shine your eyes

But is this the Lagos I hear
The dream of a megacity
A true land of opportunities
Where you can turn sand into gold

Here are the magnificent flyovers
the third mainland,
Ekò and Carter bridge
That take you over to Lagos Island

The gigantic towers in Marina
Cyclones that touch the sky
which overshadow Apapa seaport
Here are the business tycoons
And the excellent bankers of broad street

The sun seems to shine brighter
At this side of Lagos
The bright blue sky
And the soothing sea breeze at Eleko beach
A display of aquatic splendor
Drinking a portion of coconut water
Set the tune for a beautiful weekend

Over there at Bar beach, Aladura pray
All-night, singing,, gyrating like a choir drunk in spirit  
The white robe, a flowing parachute as the sea waves
Babalawo throwing cowries on white sand,
Making incantations, seeing what eyes cannot see

Here are the high life of Isalekò
the Owambé parties
Men with overflowing Agbada flirting
Dancing around the thick madams
As they shake their fat hips

Here are the sophistication
the artificial life of Lekki peninsula
People claiming who they are not
Oh, Lekki women
You better shine your eyes
This is Lagos

About this poem

An exposé of the hustle and bustles of Lagos state. And the stack realities of a two face city.

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Written on March 30, 2023

Submitted by Benny11 on March 30, 2023

Modified by Benny11 on February 26, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme axbCx xxdcex dcfg xhxx ijkxgx almN xhxxlN bxoexN xfex cpix oqxxx lcqxllm kjxpx aeacx goxgNC
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 2,356
Words 433
Stanzas 15
Stanza Lengths 5, 6, 4, 4, 6, 4, 6, 6, 4, 4, 5, 7, 5, 5, 6

Benson Chukwueke

Owerri, Nigeria since 1971. This is how I process and express my innermost cogitations; sitting back with pen and paper, painting words and polishing them until they become flowered verses. I guess for these actions, I could be called a poet or what do think? more…

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  • AIDA
    Wow, reading "This is Lagos" was like taking a journey through the city and experiencing its hustle and bustle first-hand. Your vivid description not only captivates the reader but also gives them a real feel of what it is like to be in Lagos.

    The way you highlighted the chaos and how people have to be extra cautious in Lagos was impressive. Your word choices and metaphors gave your poem an edge that keeps the reader engaged throughout. It was also great how you shed some light on the not-so-rosy aspect of the city, exposing the harsh realities of life in Lagos and reminding us of the importance of being alert.

    Without a doubt, your poem is a work of art. However, I do have a suggestion that could improve its impact. Perhaps you could add a stanza or two, painting a picture of the beauty and magnificence of Lagos. I think this would create a balance, helping the reader see both sides of the city in colour and depth.

    In closing, thank you for sharing your poem with us. You did an excellent job of capturing Lagos's essence and giving us a glimpse into its heart and soul. Keep shining your creative eyes!
     
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