The Black Dahlia



THE BLACK DAHLIA, 6.22.2021

Once again, she flowed down the hallway with ease
unsure of exactly where she was or what she sees
Confused and wondering if she should go or stay
No watch on her wrist and unsure of the time or day

She forced her mind to determine her name
Her mind could do nothing but place blame
He said that he loved her beauty and grace
Now she was stuck walking this strange place

She was searching for something, she must think
Her mind a cloud of fear, doubt, and drink
Did she know what had happened here
Her head swam with images of blood red fear
 
To meet her sister at the Biltmore on January nineth
Instead, she met a man that she could not decline
He was charming, handsome and promised the world
They cocktailed at the Crown giddy as a young girl
 
Winded and romantic he whispered her name
Elizabeth, he promised, I will ensure your ongoing fame
Your name will be in all the news, papers and books
Come with me to my room, intrigued she was hooked

The doctor carefully washed the dead body in the bath
Pushing her black hair away as he wiped her down with gas
He left only once to get some critical surgical tools
He left her side leaving warmth on the stool

Upon return with precision performed the hemicorporectomy
Sweating he admired his work and secured her destiny
He then took her down to the servant’s entrance
Careful to note that no servants were in attendance

Carefully into his sedan he Loaded her top then her bottom
He smiled, and thought to himself, should he be solemn
In the early morning light of January fifteenth, she was found
A lady and her son walked by and an alert she did sound

The Black Dahlia was born of a two-part Elizabeth Short
Newspapers saying, she prowled the Hollywood Boulevard
Police interviewed all the men that was in her address book
Combing the gas washed envelope sent for a news hook

Did anyone know the lipstick murders may have held a clue
So much time has passed, the color of her dress a faded hue
Unsolved it would remain but the promise is still the same
So famous he did make her just as he had so claimed

Forever her name will be on the lips of murder hunters
But if they only knew how to connect the numbers
Ms. Short still here wanting to tell her gruesome story
But holds back because the fame in death gives her glory

So now she just roams the halls of the Biltmore hotel
Watching for the chance to give the Doctor a farewell
For eternity she will wait for the man that made her famous
While the stories, books and movies of her death entertain us

About this poem

The unsolved murder of Elizabeth Short has always intrigued me.

Font size:
Collection  PDF     
 

Written on June 22, 2021

Submitted by reneepeyregne on March 28, 2023

Modified on March 29, 2023

2:41 min read
3

Quick analysis:

Scheme X AABB CCDD EEXX FXXX CCXX FXXX CGHH IIJJ XXKK LLCX MMGG NNOO
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 2,592
Words 538
Stanzas 13
Stanza Lengths 1, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4

Renee Peyregne

I am an Army veteran, and a daughter of a Army veteran. I have been writing poetry and short stories for years. I grew up in the South, and have had a rich career in Human Resources. more…

All Renee Peyregne poems | Renee Peyregne Books

1 fan

Discuss the poem The Black Dahlia with the community...

0 Comments

    Translation

    Find a translation for this poem in other languages:

    Select another language:

    • - Select -
    • 简体中文 (Chinese - Simplified)
    • 繁體中文 (Chinese - Traditional)
    • Español (Spanish)
    • Esperanto (Esperanto)
    • 日本語 (Japanese)
    • Português (Portuguese)
    • Deutsch (German)
    • العربية (Arabic)
    • Français (French)
    • Русский (Russian)
    • ಕನ್ನಡ (Kannada)
    • 한국어 (Korean)
    • עברית (Hebrew)
    • Gaeilge (Irish)
    • Українська (Ukrainian)
    • اردو (Urdu)
    • Magyar (Hungarian)
    • मानक हिन्दी (Hindi)
    • Indonesia (Indonesian)
    • Italiano (Italian)
    • தமிழ் (Tamil)
    • Türkçe (Turkish)
    • తెలుగు (Telugu)
    • ภาษาไทย (Thai)
    • Tiếng Việt (Vietnamese)
    • Čeština (Czech)
    • Polski (Polish)
    • Bahasa Indonesia (Indonesian)
    • Românește (Romanian)
    • Nederlands (Dutch)
    • Ελληνικά (Greek)
    • Latinum (Latin)
    • Svenska (Swedish)
    • Dansk (Danish)
    • Suomi (Finnish)
    • فارسی (Persian)
    • ייִדיש (Yiddish)
    • հայերեն (Armenian)
    • Norsk (Norwegian)
    • English (English)

    Citation

    Use the citation below to add this poem to your bibliography:

    Style:MLAChicagoAPA

    "The Black Dahlia" Poetry.com. STANDS4 LLC, 2024. Web. 25 Apr. 2024. <https://www.poetry.com/poem/155155/the-black-dahlia>.

    Become a member!

    Join our community of poets and poetry lovers to share your work and offer feedback and encouragement to writers all over the world!

    More poems by

    Renee Peyregne

    »

    April 2024

    Poetry Contest

    Join our monthly contest for an opportunity to win cash prizes and attain global acclaim for your talent.
    5
    days
    16
    hours
    0
    minutes

    Special Program

    Earn Rewards!

    Unlock exciting rewards such as a free mug and free contest pass by commenting on fellow members' poems today!

    Browse Poetry.com

    Quiz

    Are you a poetry master?

    »
    An esteemed poet appointed by a government or conferring institution such as the Royal Household is called?
    A Poet Laureate
    B Official
    C Pulitzer
    D British Writer