Aging



We all age.
Some well.
Some, not so well.

Aches and losses
Hold sway over
Our day.

Family and friends who’ve passed before
Dispirited, we surmise
Eternally rage
Their shorted tide.

Longing and loss
Can knot the heart
But losing to age
Wins its release.

Aging can bless us to be
The one who we wish we were.
The one the dog believes we are.

To smile at anyone anywhere.
Can ask for help without no shame,
And offer it without no blame.

Fear no longer
Casts its pall
A shadow so long and tall.
The sun of wisdom
Shines so bright
Chases shadows out of sight.

Memories are a film-house vault
Many defy the natural fault.
Missing that car by
Happenstance
Life granting yet
Another chance.

No longer fear
The End Is Near
For again we’ll see
Faces dear.

About this poem

I am now 70 years old and I lost many friends last year including a dear friend I have known since grade school I began to feel like aging was a curse. I needed to explore this feeling.

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Written on February 10, 2023

Submitted by brettster1952 on March 28, 2023

Modified on March 29, 2023

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Scheme ABB XCX XXAX XXAX DCX XEE CXXXFF GGXHXH IIDI
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 759
Words 163
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 4, 4, 3, 3, 6, 6, 4

Brett Mentzer

I am 69 years old. I earned a Masters in English by 1979 and edited a literary magazine for a couple of years in college. I ended up a financial advisor for 35 years, retiring in 2015. more…

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