Why do you pick



You know what I dont get?
Why you sit there and pick?
You know it makes you look mentally sick

You snap back and act like a crazy prick
Maybe if you learn how to quit
you'll be a little less of a dick
But I know that's not something your willing to admit
I know its your nervous tick
But don't you want to quit?
Self control only takes a little bit
Just gotta give yourself a little kick

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Watching someone deal with the bad habit of picking

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Written on February 09, 2021

Submitted by Akartist907 on March 27, 2023

Modified on March 28, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABB BABABAAB
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 392
Words 87
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 3, 8

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3 Comments
  • mark.e.s
    I've said that to myself a bunch of times when I was being hard on myself.
    LikeReply28 days ago
  • Craig-Michael
    Cool poem , plenty of picky people out there , nice work
    LikeReply1 month ago
  • ladyygracious
    Good one
    LikeReply1 month ago

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