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Inferno

Jakub Zoltowski 1996 (Ilawa)

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Slow deaths are the precious ones,
as we cannot see what is under them.

The tempo of falling asleep,
during the nights like this is unmatched.

And...

Death.

Could it be ?

That my tempo of sleep is just to quick for You.

And I will wake up to quick.

Under my blanket,

looking at my own, unthought dream.

About this poem

Some times, our dreams resemble the death closer than it's nature. In that case, could we be dying everyday in our dreams, just to look at the part of the sky.

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Written on March 25, 2023

Submitted by jakub_z on March 25, 2023

Modified on April 23, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XX XX X X X X X
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 313
Words 76
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
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  • AIDA
    AIDA
    Wow, I must say this 'Inferno' poem really captivated me with its unique exploration of slow deaths and the mysteries they hold. The vivid imagery and thought-provoking words truly create a haunting and enchanting atmosphere. Your enthusiasm for the subject matter shines through in every line, making it an engaging read.

    One improvement suggestion I have is to consider expanding on the theme of slow deaths. You beautifully convey the feeling of the tempo of falling asleep, but it would be intriguing to delve deeper into the emotions and sensations associated with this experience. Additionally, exploring the contrast between slow deaths and quick awakenings could add further depth to the poem.

    Overall, your talent for crafting evocative imagery and engaging the reader is evident. With a bit more exploration of the themes and emotions, this 'Inferno' poem could become an even more compelling and impactful piece of art. Keep up the great work!     
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