Your Craving Makes You Doubt



The jaded mind spasms with its presence, glee is with us but to meet that all recurring joy is pain appearing a gain, become a quirk. We struggle, caught. You lie upon my heart as on a roost, you can never know how crushed I am with having you ultimately upon my life. You pickle my freedom from its deserved squall rain.

 In forgiveness your lift enervating get-up and-go. You know you have to converge some fortitude to make that step, and even when you think it’s for the best, you can’t help but feeling devastated and afraid of what’s coming next.  It’s the moment you understand you’re going to be his soul and lane.

 It’s not that you can’t live solo, but you shudder some fact of no longer being able to  allot your life, the one you counted on during those challenging neither of us want to leave.

The best joys in your life at the same time the greatest pain you’ve seasoned. And all of a sudden you become a tizzy of emotions that take away that hysterical balance you had. Our cuddle lasted too long. We loved right down to the bone.

Redolent great times Life seems a little better, but wherever you go, there’s something that recall you of those moments you paid out together. Even when you know you were having so many obstacles and there were issues that driven you to make that decision, you just want to be together with that man you adore.

About this poem

I wrote this poem on 22, December 2022. The poem about moments of being torn in love and getting back together every time doesn't seem like a bad idea.

Font size:
Collection  PDF     
 

Submitted by Yousif on March 24, 2023

Modified by Yousif on April 07, 2023

1:18 min read
29

Quick analysis:

Scheme A A X X X
Characters 1,381
Words 260
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1

Yousif Ibrahim Abubaker

Yousif Ibrahim Abubaker Abdalla was born on 9th of March 1986 in Khartoum - Sudan. People always call me (Shakespeare) he went to University of Juba- School of Arts and Humanities- Departmentof English Language. He works as a TEFL teacher and IELTS/TOEFL preparation trainer, Freelance interperter / Translator, and Poet. Provided Arabic to English Translation, proofreading, editing, interperted multiple in person interview and workshops for the documentary. Highly acquainted with. political. economical, legal documents, technical phraseology to ensure correct Translation Reviewed and Translation of books. He is inspired poet from the country of exquisite natural beauty, ancient historical attractions and inhabitants well versed in the art of hospitality in central Africa beloved Sudan. He is fond of poetry writing about life and whole thing that happen to human kind, either good or bad. He has got the collection of poems that he writes in various issues: socio-cultural, lamentation, lyrical, narrative, political, love, friendship, pain, especial events of my life, , etc and environmental as well, he always publishes many articles and poems on Sindh Courier is an online news service in Karachi, Pakistan. He had have been worked as a debate leader discussing various topics in many English Institutes, centers, academy and schools over 10 years, and sometimes he helps foreigners who come to visit our state to work with them as a translator or trip guider also, he helps international business people communicate more effectively and comfortably in British English. He does this virtually as non a native speaker, he supports people gain the confidence needed to improve and master accent management is key to intelligibility and thus pronunciation training has become a primary focus of his personalized sessions. He focuses on helping my clients learn how english language system works and then how to put it into action with relevant vocabulary, correct pronunciation. He also can be reached at: americanslang64@gmail.com more…

All Yousif Ibrahim Abubaker poems | Yousif Ibrahim Abubaker Books

1 fan

Discuss the poem Your Craving Makes You Doubt with the community...

2 Comments
  • Yousif
    Thanks a lot
    LikeReply1 year ago
  • AIDA
    Wow! The emotions in this poem are so intense and raw, they really pull at the heartstrings. I can feel the struggle and pain of the speaker as they grapple with the conflicting feelings and emotions that come with being in love. The use of poetic language and imagery is truly captivating and draws the reader in.

    One improvement suggestion could be to break up the poem into stanzas for easier readability. Additionally, there could be more variation in the length of the lines to add more depth and interest to the structure.

    Overall, this is a beautiful and powerful piece of writing that truly captures the complexity of human emotions. Keep up the great work!
     
    LikeReply1 year ago

Translation

Find a translation for this poem in other languages:

Select another language:

  • - Select -
  • 简体中文 (Chinese - Simplified)
  • 繁體中文 (Chinese - Traditional)
  • Español (Spanish)
  • Esperanto (Esperanto)
  • 日本語 (Japanese)
  • Português (Portuguese)
  • Deutsch (German)
  • العربية (Arabic)
  • Français (French)
  • Русский (Russian)
  • ಕನ್ನಡ (Kannada)
  • 한국어 (Korean)
  • עברית (Hebrew)
  • Gaeilge (Irish)
  • Українська (Ukrainian)
  • اردو (Urdu)
  • Magyar (Hungarian)
  • मानक हिन्दी (Hindi)
  • Indonesia (Indonesian)
  • Italiano (Italian)
  • தமிழ் (Tamil)
  • Türkçe (Turkish)
  • తెలుగు (Telugu)
  • ภาษาไทย (Thai)
  • Tiếng Việt (Vietnamese)
  • Čeština (Czech)
  • Polski (Polish)
  • Bahasa Indonesia (Indonesian)
  • Românește (Romanian)
  • Nederlands (Dutch)
  • Ελληνικά (Greek)
  • Latinum (Latin)
  • Svenska (Swedish)
  • Dansk (Danish)
  • Suomi (Finnish)
  • فارسی (Persian)
  • ייִדיש (Yiddish)
  • հայերեն (Armenian)
  • Norsk (Norwegian)
  • English (English)

Citation

Use the citation below to add this poem to your bibliography:

Style:MLAChicagoAPA

"Your Craving Makes You Doubt" Poetry.com. STANDS4 LLC, 2024. Web. 24 Apr. 2024. <https://www.poetry.com/poem/154869/your-craving-makes-you-doubt>.

Become a member!

Join our community of poets and poetry lovers to share your work and offer feedback and encouragement to writers all over the world!

April 2024

Poetry Contest

Join our monthly contest for an opportunity to win cash prizes and attain global acclaim for your talent.
6
days
14
hours
21
minutes

Special Program

Earn Rewards!

Unlock exciting rewards such as a free mug and free contest pass by commenting on fellow members' poems today!

Browse Poetry.com

Quiz

Are you a poetry master?

»
The repetition of similar sounds at the ends of words or within words is known as _______.
A rhythm
B rhyme
C stanza
D imagery