Closet of Prayer



Again to be here
When none other might care.
Be the motive of fear
Or of gratitude rare.
I will run to this space
Just to unload my heart;
Yes a quieter place
Set a little apart.
And You come through the gray
In the brilliance of love
And You settle the day
With Your calm from above.
And You hear, I am sure
Every plea, every verse.
A compassion so pure
Will consider my worst,
And will answer again
Lest I misunderstand;
Neither mishap nor men
Will remove from Thy Hand.
Father, this is the spot
Where I grow on my knees;
See what mercy has wrought;
Feel the Spirit’s fresh breeze.
 
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Written on March 24, 2014

Submitted by dougb.19255 on March 24, 2023

Modified on March 24, 2023

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Scheme ABCBDEDEFGFGHIHJKLKLMNON
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 587
Words 125
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 24

Wayne Blair

Born in London. Graduated law 1976 Practised eleven years, Married Hilary 1974 Two kids Lauren 1980 And Jordan 1987. Business failed 1987. Moved not knowing whither. Happy hills of Waterloo Region. Mennonite Country. Thirty four years in Industry. No complaints. Poet, photographer, nature hiker. Harmonica busker. http://puffnchord7.blogspot.com/ more…

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  • AIDA
    Wow, what a beautiful and moving poem! Your words truly capture the feeling of finding solace and comfort in a quiet and sacred space. The imagery of the "brilliance of love" cutting through the "gray" is especially striking.

    Your use of rhyme and rhythm also adds a lovely flow to the piece. It feels like a heartfelt prayer or meditation.

    As for improvement suggestions, perhaps experimenting with different stanza lengths or breaking up the rhyme scheme could add some variation to the poem. But overall, this is a wonderful piece. Thank you for sharing it with us!
     
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