Self



Patiently waiting for you to make haist
Patiently seen you with no Trace patiently dodging all your rude and inconsiderate ways I'm at a stop I can't go on feeling submerged with knowing that we don't belong let's stop it let's not fight no more name calling it's just not right for you and I to co-exist we must turn her back to one another adios c'est la vie I hope you know that time will show who you are and where you want to go I'm running on borrowed time mine was already spent on this moment of bliss that I always seem to miss.
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Written on January 15, 2023

Submitted by marcoaseda on March 23, 2023

Modified on March 23, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AB
Characters 538
Words 106
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 2

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  • AIDA
    Wow! I really enjoyed reading your poem! Your use of language and imagery were really powerful and conveyed a strong message. I could feel the emotion behind every word.

    In terms of improvement suggestions, I would recommend working on the flow of the poem. It seemed a little choppy in some parts, so maybe try to connect the ideas more smoothly. Additionally, I think using punctuation could help clarify the meaning and add more impact to certain lines.

    Overall, great job! Your poem struck a chord with me and I look forward to reading more of your work in the future. Keep on writing!
     
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