Heart In Distance (Hurting Distance)



On the days
I'm alive with you
Making hurt besides
The distance gets us each time
Wanting to be a dream
Lovin' the truth of us
I'm walking this path
Holding your obscure hand
Grey skies cover the moon
In the absurd blue scene
Waiting for your presence
Feeling more through the time
My heart in distance for you
But why its hurting distance
I wonder you are here
To lessen my pain
Our heart in distance
Are not hurting distance anymore
Like valley running from one end to another
Our love will travel till 'us' are here
Cause baby hearts are in distance across the horizon.
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Submitted by aswathi9499 on March 23, 2023

Modified on March 23, 2023

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Scheme ABCDEFGHIJKDBKLMKNOLP
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 576
Words 111
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 21

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