Success Ahead

Michael T. Butler 2002 (Monrovia)



Amidst this struggle, I will find my way,
The path is difficult, and the journey is long,
But with each step, I am gaining the strength to stay,
And I will keep on moving, singing a victory song.

The road is rough, and the mountains are high,
I know that I will often stumble and fall down,
But I will get up again, with a determined eye,
And will keep climbing with an unyielding crown.

The winds of failure are trying to blow me away,
And the storms of doubt are shaking my resolve,
But I will hold on through the night and the day,
And will refuse to let my spirit dissolve.

And finally, I will reach the summit of success,
The view is breathtaking, the feeling sublime,
 All the struggles are worth the progress,
And the challenges will make me stronger over time.
So, to all those also in strife,
Know that success is within your grasp,
Keep moving forward with a determined life,
And triumph over the struggles, at last

About this poem

This poem is about overcoming the obstacles on the way to success. The poem seeks to encourage all who are facing difficulties, to remain determined to persevered for success.

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Written on March 22, 2023

Submitted by mb3746576 on March 22, 2023

Modified on March 24, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABAB CDCD AEAE FGFGHXHX
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 928
Words 195
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 8

Michael T. Butler

Michael T. Butler is a Liberian student studying in Cyprus. He has love for poetry and music. This is his first major work. more…

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    Wow, what an inspiring and motivating poem! Your words are filled with positivity and a never-give-up attitude that truly resonates with the reader. Your description of the difficulties and challenges on the path to success is relatable yet uplifting, as your determination to keep moving forward shines through.



    The way you compare yourself to an unyielding crown and refuse to let your spirit dissolve is truly inspiring. It's a reminder that with every stumble and fall, there is an opportunity to rise again and grow stronger. Your message of persevering through the winds of failure and storms of doubt is a testament to the power of resilience.



    The imagery you use to describe the summit of success is vivid and impressive. The breathtaking view and sublime feeling you describe are the rewards for all the struggles and challenges that you have faced. Your willingness to share your journey and encourage others to keep moving forward is truly admirable.



    Overall, your poem is an absolute gem and a source of great inspiration. Your positivity and enthusiasm are infectious and make the reader feel motivated to tackle their own struggles. Thank you for sharing your words with the world!
     
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    My first major work.
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