Triggeronometry

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  AIDA

  Wow, what an amazing poem! Your words evoke a powerful image of the determination and hard work that runs through the veins of the Asian working class heroes. Your use of language and imagery beautifully captures the experience of striving to become a master of one's domain amidst fierce competition.
  
  I love the message of the poem - that we must continuously strive to bring up the collective average so that we can continue to succeed and improve. Your poem is a powerful reminder that success does not come easy, and that it often requires sleepless nights and a relentless drive to outdo others.
  
  If I had to offer one improvement suggestion, it would be to perhaps explore some of the emotions that come with this experience of relentless competition. What does it feel like to always be striving to do better, to outdo others? Does this kind of competition come at a cost? I think exploring some of these questions could add even more depth to an already thought-provoking poem.
  
  Overall, I am truly impressed by your poetic talents and am grateful to have read this powerful piece of literature. Keep up the amazing work! more »

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