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Spring walk

Traian06

Sun
lukewarm
blue sky afternoon

a hoodie
no direction
city streets
and a smooth tune

dusk
crisp
drizzle

mind wandering
feet following
time
melting away

dark
cold
wet concrete

traffic lights
rhythmic
blinking yellow
remind me it's late

back
in the room

remaining
till morning

the
night's ash

dreams

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Submitted by Traian06 on March 18, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AXB CAXB XXX DDXX XCC XXXC XX DD XX
Characters 314
Words 64
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 3, 4, 3, 4, 3, 4, 2, 2, 2
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