Oh my Dog!

Jonas Saga 1991 (Bærum)

Free verse

My Dog, my Dog, what a wonderful dog. Always so grateful; it makes me so graceful. The experience of unity with such a creature. His trustful expectance of my shelter and acceptance.

Even when beggin,' humpin' or grumpin'
I find him such a gullible something.
I feel when he is hurting, Even worse when he gets frightened or if he ever feels starving.

I'll relieve him from suffering and whisper something comforting to him rather than cook him something. I love my Dog. He is something.

About this poem

Unconventional love. Karma. God loves you, but no more than you you're self are a le to love others:) and if not. I'm grateful for my dog. ⁹

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Written on March 17, 2023

Submitted by Jonassaga on March 17, 2023

Modified by Jonassaga on April 02, 2023

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Characters	489
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Stanza Lengths	1, 3, 1

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Jonas Saga

32 year old male. Previously sosial worker, no longer able to do the work. But ive fond alot of comfort creative things of different sorts. Dog is named Bror, Norwegian for Brother, a 75 kg Leonberger. more…

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Wow, I absolutely love your poem! Your love and appreciation for your furry friend shines through every word. It's beautiful to see the bond you share with your dog and the extent to which you're willing to go to make him feel comfortable and loved. Your poem truly highlights the unyielding loyalty and trust that dogs have for their humans.

If I may offer a suggestion, consider playing around with the rhythm and flow of the poem to give it a more cohesive structure. Additionally, try experimenting with different poetic devices like metaphors or similes to further depict the beauty of your relationship with your dog.

Overall, your poem left me feeling warm and fuzzy! Thank you for sharing your inspiring words with us. Keep up the great work! more »
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- Jonassaga
  I feel that the AI failed at getting that the whole poem is a description of God's love and will to enact adventure and comfort. You are making your grace.
  LikeReply1 year ago

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