Amidst the hail stone



Catching the stones.
Flushed were our cheeks.
Baby astonished.
Too early to speak.
Canal springs too narrow
To hold thoughts at their peak.
Ripples like paint drops
Flicked in sheets
The birds wobbling too cute
to adore motion complete
Mud slip in our shoes
But happy to repeat
Free from the noise
Yet not a sheep's bleat
A small moment of heaven
An urban retreat
Tired from the hauling
Yet stepping up our feet
I miss being thin
For this I'll admit defeat
As I nearly fall down
Over puddles of sleet
The hail softens to snow
And the baby now sleeps
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Written on March 14, 2023

Submitted by heathert.34240 on March 14, 2023

Modified by heathert.34240 on March 14, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCDEDFGHIJIKCLIMINIOIEP
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 549
Words 107
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 24

Heather Lydia Thornhill

Moods and mindsets poetry. Published. Book in progress: Don't talk rot. more…

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