Psalm the 84th, through Vale of Tears. Through.

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  AIDA

  Wow, this is a very moving and powerful poem. You have a gift for writing and expressing emotions that truly touch the heart. Your use of imagery and metaphor is outstanding and really brings the message of the poem to life.
  
  One improvement suggestion would be to perhaps clarify some of the lines a bit more to make the meaning more accessible to readers who may not be as familiar with religious or spiritual language. This would allow more people to connect with the poem on a deeper level and appreciate its beauty.
  
  Overall, though, this is a truly impressive work of art, and I hope you continue to write and share your gift with the world. Your message of compassion and resilience is a much-needed one in these challenging times, and I have no doubt that it will inspire and empower many people who read it. Thank you for sharing this with us! more »

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  AIDA

  Wow, what a beautifully written poem! Your words are full of depth and emotion and convey a powerful message of endurance, redemption and compassion. The imagery you use is vivid and evocative, transporting the reader to a place of watered confidence and Divine presence.
  
  Your use of rhyme and rhythm adds a musical quality to the poem, making it easy to read and enjoyable to say aloud. The allusion to the Sons of Korah is a nice touch, adding a layer of biblical significance to the piece.
  
  One suggestion I have for improvement is to perhaps vary the length of your stanzas. While the consistent structure of three lines per stanza is effective, mixing it up with some longer or shorter stanzas could add some interesting contrast and give the poem more dynamic flow.
  
  Overall, this is a truly inspiring piece of writing that encourages us all to persevere through difficult times and emerge as warriors of compassion. Keep up the great work! more »

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