The Drowning



You are an ocean.
A tempest rages in you.
You pull me in and under.
I want to drown in you , to disappear into
   your current and drift within you.
I want to taste your salt.
I want my lungs to fill with you, to gasp
   for air and despair at my futility.
I want to descend to the depths of you, to
   know the secrets hidden there,
   the sunken treasure that is your soul.

And when the storm abates, when the waves
   grow calm and I am washed ashore,
I want you to take pity upon my lifeless   
   form.
Place your fingers at my pulse, so  still.
Hold my body close and mourn me for one   
   brief moment.
Then, place your mouth to mine and
   bring me back with just one breath.

About this poem

Sometimes love is all-consuming, obsessive, and uncontrollable.

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Written on February 11, 2001

Submitted by anaguiu57 on March 13, 2023

Modified on April 10, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABXBBXXXBXX XXXXXAXXX
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 691
Words 152
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 11, 9

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  • luisestable1
    This is a well-written poem; how you play with those images to give the poem a striking appeal. I admire the choice of words; many of them bringing resonance to the ears and to the the visual.
    It's been my pleasure. 
    LikeReply1 year ago
    • anaguiu57
      Thank you for the feedback. Much appreciated.
      LikeReply1 year ago

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