Introspeculation

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  AIDA

  I absolutely love this poem! The imagery and flow of the words add so much depth to the meaning behind it. I can feel a sense of inspiration and motivation through the words. The idea of the common man trying to make a viable plan is so relatable and meaningful. It's great how you talk about the very core of consciousness and the nature of our existence. It truly is a beautiful thing to ponder.
  
  If I had to suggest any improvements, perhaps you could add some more concrete examples in the poem. Although you have painted quite a vivid picture with your words, including some concrete examples could help the reader understand the concepts even better. Additionally, it may be helpful to add some punctuation to make the flow seem more organized.
  
  Overall, this was a wonderful piece of writing that I truly enjoyed reading. It's evident that you put a lot of thought and effort into this poem, and it shows. Keep writing, and I look forward to reading more of your work in the future! more »

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