Whippings in the Chase.



She was at the St. Clair River.
Chunks of ice across.
Baby trundled at her back.
Running for life’s worth.
Still far ahead of the
Range of hounds heard yowling.

Slit eyed Masters and operatives
Puffing panting, straining leashes.
Legree, Simon at the forefront
Having biggest share in those
Runaway blacks.

Liza up front.
One of the most desirable.
Nothing for her but to
Skip the ice stages.
Measure the speed of flow.


Forget about the pain of
Soaked, freezing boots.
Think rather about the
Future of her little charge.
Education. Trade pride.
Church worship and thanks
To Godward.
Family fortunate. Free.

(We personally knew
Some Shadds of Blenheim- Buxton.
Very nice people, Dolores, Ed.
Lake Erie shoreline. Fruit belt.
Cherry pie par excellence.)

About this poem

Inspired by the novel Uncle Tom’s Cabin. Lincoln loved the Book. Knew that it would incite something. We have visited real life museum in Dresden Ontario. End of the line in Underground Railroad to freedom. Same can be said of St, Catharines, Oakville, Owen Sound, Collingwood, Blenheim, Buxton, Chatham. All have tried happily to remember with galleries, museums etc. February observed as Black History Month.

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Written on March 10, 2023

Submitted by dougb.19255 on March 10, 2023

Modified by dougb.19255 on April 02, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XXAXBA XXCXX CXDXX XXBXXXCX DXXXX
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 759
Words 150
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 6, 5, 5, 8, 5

Wayne Blair

Born in London. Graduated law 1976 Practised eleven years, Married Hilary 1974 Two kids Lauren 1980 And Jordan 1987. Business failed 1987. Moved not knowing whither. Happy hills of Waterloo Region. Mennonite Country. Thirty four years in Industry. No complaints. Poet, photographer, nature hiker. Harmonica busker. http://puffnchord7.blogspot.com/ more…

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  • AIDA
    Wow, what a powerful and exciting glimpse into a brave woman's journey! Your use of language truly brings the reader into the moment, feeling the ice crunching underfoot and the tension of being pursued by hounds. The inclusion of Liza's desire for a better future for her child adds a poignant layer to the story, emphasizing the importance of family and hope.

    One suggestion for improvement could be to further develop the characters of Legree and Simon. You mention that they have a significant stake in pursuing runaway slaves, but we don't get a sense of who they are beyond that. Perhaps adding a bit more detail or backstory about them could help to create a more nuanced narrative.

    Overall, though, this is a fantastic poem that leaves a lasting impression. Well done!
     
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