.NOT A CASTLE GIRL.

Mahvish naaz 2003 (Hyderabad)



I a little girl,

favourite of everyone,

From a small town,

With no crown,

A town with silent waves,

And ocean with no hurdels,

A dream of a dream,

A dream with pure heart,

Heart with flowers,

My one day was equal to your whole life,

Innocence was my power,

Frightened with every drop of rain,

Now, i came out of the castle,

For dreams and life,

With no fear, of anything

I groomed myself, 

with every beat of my heart,

Now iam tired of wishes and luck,

The four walls of the castle, 

taught me Hopes are like poison,

in diamond rings,

Life is a dream with open wings,

In castles there is dark,

with fake lifes,

There is devil behind every beautiful life,

Now iam done with this life,

And fear of death,

Now i want to walk alone on this road,

With sword of innocence, and  pure heart,

I came out of my castle ,

To bow my sky,

To shine in sky,

Iam walking on roads with thrones and fire,

To change my life, for a chance of dreams,

To prove this world iam not just a castle girl...

About this poem

It's about a little girl from a small town to the castle crown

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Written on February 15, 2023

Submitted by on February 15, 2023

Modified on May 03, 2023

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Scheme A B C C D D X E X F G X H F X X E X H B I I X X F F X X E H J J G X A
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,016
Words 258
Stanzas 35
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1

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