Thunder Eyes



Thunder in her eyes,
    cut me me down to size,
          lightning in her mind,
              she seemed to be a bit unkind.

Then she did amaze,
    when she said "you're just going through a phase".
        with all the dues I've paid,
              I've finally found the one for whom I prayed.

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Written on February 28, 2023

Submitted on February 28, 2023

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AABB CCDD
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 299
Words 57
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 4, 4

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