The Caged Mind: A Poem of Existential Realism
I cannot speak of gods or higher planes,
For I have seen no proof of their domain;
My mind is but a cage, shaped by the chains
Of all my past experiences and pain.
The bars are formed of fear and doubt and shame,
The echoes of my failures and mistakes;
And though I try to break free from this frame,
My memories are all that my mind takes.
I read of Sartre, of Camus, of Nietzsche,
And their words ring true within my skull;
The concept of free will seems so unpretty,
When all my past defines my every lull.
The past is a weight that drags me down low,
And though I try to escape its embrace,
It follows me wherever I may go,
A ghost that haunts my every thought and space.
Perhaps there is no freedom to be found,
No escape from the cage that I am in;
Perhaps the chains that hold me to the ground
Are all that keep me safe from the within.
For if I were to break free of my past,
Would I be anything but a blank slate?
A vessel without substance or contrast,
Just waiting for some new trauma or fate?
No, I must learn to accept my own chains,
Embrace the cage that is my own design;
For only then can I break from these pains,
And find a peace that is truly mine.
So let the poets and philosophers speak,
Of the freedom that we all must attain;
For within the cage, there is strength unique,
And in the darkness, there is light to gain.
The bars of my cage may never disappear,
But I am the master of my own fate;
And though my past may be dark and unclear,
My future is mine to shape and create.
So let me embrace the cage that is me,
And find the beauty in the struggle and strife;
For within the darkness, there is a key,
To unlock the door to a meaningful life.
The cage within my mind is not a curse,
But rather a reminder of who I am;
A sum of my experiences diverse,
That have shaped me into a unique program.
My scars and wounds are not to be denied,
For they are part of what makes me complete;
They do not signify that I have died,
But rather that I am strong and concrete.
I am not defined by my past mistakes,
But rather by the strength I've gained from them;
I am not bound by the chains that it makes,
But rather by the power to transcend.
And so I walk along the path of life,
A journey that is filled with twists and turns;
My cage within my mind my only strife,
And yet, my only hope to truly learn.
For as I move along this winding way,
I come to realize that all is one;
That every step I take, both night and day,
Is but a part of a grander plan begun.
The cage within my mind is but a door,
A gateway to the wisdom that awaits;
A chance to open up and explore,
To see beyond the bounds of mortal fates.
And so I choose to stay within this cage,
For I know that it is here I truly grow;
That every struggle, pain and strife, a page,
That adds to who I am, to what I know.
And when my time upon this earth is done,
And I must face the great unknown beyond;
I will look back upon my life and run,
With joy and pride, and not a hint of bond.
For I will know that every step I took,
Was but a part of a grander design;
That every choice I made, every look,
Led me to where I am, to what is mine.
And so I leave this sonnet with a smile,
A gift of hope to all who read these lines;
That though we may be caged for a while,
Our spirits soar, and in our hearts, light shines.
The cage within my mind is not a flaw,
But rather a canvas for me to paint;
A space to create, to learn, to draw,
A chance to grow, to change, to never faint.
For in the depths of my own solitude,
I find the strength to face another day;
I find the will to push through the hardest mood,
And find the light to guide me on my way.
The cage within my mind is not a trap,
But rather a temple where I can pray;
A sanctuary where I can take a nap,
And recharge myself for the next day's fray.
And though the past may haunt me with its ghosts,
I choose to face them with an open heart;
For every memory that weighs me the most,
Is but a chance to make a brand new start.
The cage within my mind is not a curse,
But rather a blessing in disguise;
A chance to grow, to change, to be diverse,
And see the world through new and different eyes.
For in the end, it's not the cage that counts,
But rather how we choose to live our lives;
It's not the chains that hold us to our mounts,
But rather the strength that in our hearts thrives.
And so I leave you with this final thought,
A challenge for you to take and embrace;
To see the cage within your mind as naught,
But rather a canvas to paint and trace.
For in the end, it's not the cage that defines,
But rather the strength that we find inside;
The power to transcend our mortal lines,
And let our spirits soar, unbound and wide.
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About this poem
The poem presents an introspective and philosophical exploration of the human experience and the role that past experiences and pain play in shaping an individual's mindset. The speaker expresses a sense of being trapped within their own mind, with the bars of their cage formed by fear, doubt, shame, and memories of past failures and mistakes. Through references to existentialist thinkers such as Sartre, Camus, and Nietzsche, the poem challenges the concept of free will in the face of the overwhelming influence of past experiences. The speaker ultimately comes to the conclusion that accepting their own chains and embracing their past experiences is the key to finding peace and shaping their own future. The poem's language is rich and complex, utilizing advanced vocabulary and literary references to convey its message. Overall, it presents a thought-provoking and enigmatic exploration of the human psyche and the role of the past in shaping our present and future. more »
Written on June 12, 2019
Submitted by Mawphniang.Napoleon on February 23, 2023
Modified on March 05, 2023
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