I drank the river dry



I sit quietly at the banks
of the river smoking my
last cigarette.
I talk to the river and the
river talks back to me.  

My Storm coat does its
best to keep me warm
and dry
But I am cold and alone.  

My thoughts are dank like
the sky for I have drank the
river dry

A cloud bursts another tear
duct
The wind cries in the rain

But I don’t cry for I have drank
the river dry

I’m like a weather vane spinning
in the wind.
Rudderless and lost.
Crestfallen.  

But I do not cry for I have drank
the river dry.






 

About this poem

It’s about hitting the brick wall of life. Coming to a standstill. Utter despair really. I seem to write a lot about this but I don’t do it consciously.

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Written on November 18, 2023

Submitted by pauljoe77 on February 21, 2023

Modified by pauljoe77 on July 12, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme xaxbx xxax xba xxx cA xxxx cA
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 535
Words 137
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 5, 4, 3, 3, 2, 4, 2

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