Thistle of the Nile



Beautiful you are Thistle of the Nile
In bloom you sprout all year
Joy you bring many with smiles
The banks lay out in line for you in style
 
The Nile breeze blows through you all year
In silence you remain calmed like a mane on a Lion's neck
Like a babe in the arms of a mothers cuddle you won't break
Lightly you wonder off bended in the breeze of the day break
 
Holding onto the reeds a time you firmly grip
Lasting shortly like the noon bright shine
Daringly you move back and forth like a tip of a warrior's arrow
Dartingly you leap in spite of the ferocity of the Nile crocodile
 
Painlessly you gaze upon the roof of the skies
Clouds linger to hold the rains as they darken like the night
Who taught you to move to the sound of the whistle
The noise you make so much but as though so little
When the wind blows you don't bend
A melody you enjoy squeaky like life so brittle
 
Will you break like an eagle de-beaks itself in pain?
Stand still in train of the line of the slain
Disdained highly for none to imagine and explain
You are beautiful and brave mighty for thine

About this poem

The beauty of the Nile described as the gem it is.

Font size:
Collection  PDF     
 

Written on October 05, 2021

Submitted by Richardmwebesa707 on February 12, 2023

Modified on April 29, 2023

1:05 min read
48

Quick analysis:

Scheme ABXA BXCC XDXA XXEEXE FFFD
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,078
Words 215
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 6, 4

Discuss the poem Thistle of the Nile with the community...

1 Comment
  • AIDA
    Wow, what a beautifully crafted poem! Your description of the Thistle of the Nile is so vivid and enchanting. I could almost imagine myself standing beside this stunning plant, feeling the Nile breeze blowing through me.

    Your use of similes is just delightful, comparing the Thistle's calmness to a lion's mane and its movements to a warrior's arrow. And who would have thought to include a Nile crocodile in a poem about a flower - it adds such depth and intrigue.

    My only suggestion for improvement would be to perhaps add a little more structure to the poem. Sometimes the flow of the verses can be a little erratic, making it challenging to follow the narrative.

    Overall though, this is a fantastic piece of writing - your words have truly painted a picture in my mind. Keep up the great work!
     
    LikeReply1 year ago

Translation

Find a translation for this poem in other languages:

Select another language:

  • - Select -
  • 简体中文 (Chinese - Simplified)
  • 繁體中文 (Chinese - Traditional)
  • Español (Spanish)
  • Esperanto (Esperanto)
  • 日本語 (Japanese)
  • Português (Portuguese)
  • Deutsch (German)
  • العربية (Arabic)
  • Français (French)
  • Русский (Russian)
  • ಕನ್ನಡ (Kannada)
  • 한국어 (Korean)
  • עברית (Hebrew)
  • Gaeilge (Irish)
  • Українська (Ukrainian)
  • اردو (Urdu)
  • Magyar (Hungarian)
  • मानक हिन्दी (Hindi)
  • Indonesia (Indonesian)
  • Italiano (Italian)
  • தமிழ் (Tamil)
  • Türkçe (Turkish)
  • తెలుగు (Telugu)
  • ภาษาไทย (Thai)
  • Tiếng Việt (Vietnamese)
  • Čeština (Czech)
  • Polski (Polish)
  • Bahasa Indonesia (Indonesian)
  • Românește (Romanian)
  • Nederlands (Dutch)
  • Ελληνικά (Greek)
  • Latinum (Latin)
  • Svenska (Swedish)
  • Dansk (Danish)
  • Suomi (Finnish)
  • فارسی (Persian)
  • ייִדיש (Yiddish)
  • հայերեն (Armenian)
  • Norsk (Norwegian)
  • English (English)

Citation

Use the citation below to add this poem to your bibliography:

Style:MLAChicagoAPA

"Thistle of the Nile" Poetry.com. STANDS4 LLC, 2024. Web. 25 Apr. 2024. <https://www.poetry.com/poem/151392/thistle-of-the-nile>.

Become a member!

Join our community of poets and poetry lovers to share your work and offer feedback and encouragement to writers all over the world!

April 2024

Poetry Contest

Join our monthly contest for an opportunity to win cash prizes and attain global acclaim for your talent.
5
days
6
hours
13
minutes

Special Program

Earn Rewards!

Unlock exciting rewards such as a free mug and free contest pass by commenting on fellow members' poems today!

Browse Poetry.com

Quiz

Are you a poetry master?

»
How many syllables an Iambic Pentameter line must have?
A 20
B 3
C 10
D 12