The Path Toward Yourself



The submerged thought, that lasts forever,
The cherished loss, became a win
The endless care we share together
Naively makes the brain to sin,
And lets the thinker oversee.

We’ll sin to date, and date to be
The clumps we have, we try to unravel
And naturally, we’ll get to see
The end of it, the tie of it
Emerging up, emerging deep.

I love the colours sharpened by,
A glory story, that we see
In forest down, the backwards way,
We love to think, will be the day
The day we feel, the other way.

I’m getting lost by thoughts and dreams,
The light I have has changed my path
I want to be, to go that way,
The way, that droves me overseas,
And reaches me to who I am.

As easy sounds, it helps you get
The choir of birds, the grass’ whistle
The path that sun has made you clear
At least, you try, you must conquer
The what you have, to what you get.

About this poem

This is something very symbolic to me, that’s exactly the path I chose to get myself up from all the misery, and that’s exactly how I understood that I had to be myself all the time.

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Written on August 02, 2023

Submitted by apostolvitalie27 on February 09, 2023

Modified by apostolvitalie27 on February 09, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABABC CDCXX XCEEE XXEXX FDXAF
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 866
Words 191
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 5, 5, 5, 5, 5

Vitalie Apostol

I’m a writer based in Moldova, that has lots of inspiration for writing, I write everything, from essays to poetry, although poetry has got my soul, I just can’t stop writing poems. I hope all my poems will suit you, and I’m ready for all the reviews. more…

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