Hope we are right

Amanda Cardwell 1985 (Kentucky)



I made love with you,
I gave my heart to you,
After it was crushed,
After it was froze,
I know I crushed yours,
I know I crushed it hard,
But I said I'm sorry with all that I love,
I hope you forgive me,
That looked of hunger,
That kiss ,that touch
Pulled me back in once again,
That light in you eyes,
My love,
my darling,
my one and only friend,
 PI fell hard. I fell deep,
That spark, That shiver,
You made me quiver,
The quake that shook,
The bond of love,
I hope we are right,
I hope this real,
A second chance,
Another cold chill,
I hope we are right,
Our love will carry on,
I don't want it to be wrong,
Giving our love another shot,
Right for living in that moment,
You hit that special spot,
The spot so intense,
I almost forgot,
Forgot how it felt,
The way you made my heart melt,
I love you baby,
I really do,
Please don't forget that,
my baby you are,
My dream,
My star,
Always you will be and forever more!

  

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Giving love a another chance and hoping you are right and holding on to what you have

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Written on January 27, 2023

Submitted by amandadcarter3685 on January 27, 2023

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