HEAVEN HELP US, IT MUST BE ELVIS



there he proudly stood
behind the counter at my 7-11
an elderly man with tattoos
who crooned Jail house rock & my blue heaven

say, wasn't the king
supposed to be dead
overfilled with rich food and pills
the fame went to his head

so when i walked into the store
much to my surprise
a clerk with sunglasses and a  cape
what a sight for sore eyes

heaven help us
i shouted out
it must be elvis
i had no doubt

he had a 300 pound pouch
bushy sideburns and a toupay in black
and in the parking lot
sat a '57 pink cadillac

the king is alive
a little older, do tell
selling slurpees, singing to the oldies
the songs he knows so well

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Written on January 09, 2023

Submitted by wink7523 on January 09, 2023

Modified on March 14, 2023

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Scheme XXXX XAXA XBXB XCXC XDXD XEXE
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 629
Words 132
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4

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