Ode to the Willow Tree



O’ thou lovely willow tree
Why is it you weep?
Is it the tiny raindrops
Dancing on each leaf?

Like encircling curtains
Pendulous branches fall
Cascading slender leaves
Extend outward, droop, sprawl

O’ thou drooping willow
Why do you so weep?
Are your branches heavy
From secrets you keep?

Tales, myths, sorcery
Envelop your past
Many a love spell
Romances have cast

O’ you soothing sight
Why is it you weep?
Are your limbs longing
For someone to keep?

A haven of comfort
You offer each a place
Who ventures underneath
For your playful embrace

O’ thou graceful beauty
Why should you so weep?
Your loveliness invites
Pleasant thoughts to keep

Cuddling within the softness
Nature provides the bed
Room to escape weariness
Close my eyes, rest my head

O’ thou willow tree
I know why you weep!
Your tears are healing
So I peacefully sleep

Soft, tender caresses
Drift across my face
Offering solace
In your tender embrace

About this poem

Coming soon! Mother Nature will announce spring with astute ‘makeovers’. Flowers in bloom, birds in song, ducks in flight will appear along with windy days. After winter’s last thaw, the weeping willow flaunts a flowing essence. Drooping branches become the soul of grace!

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Submitted by sharla_l on January 28, 2023

Modified on March 28, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme aBxx xcxc xbab adxd xBeb xfxf abxb ghgh abeb xfgf
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 936
Words 176
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 9, 4, 4, 4, 4

Sharla Lee Shults

Sharla Lee Shults retired in 2008 after two careers, one with the railroad industry and the other in education. She presently works with Beacon Educator in Panama City, Fl as an educational consultant providing professional development for teachers throughout the state of Florida. She enjoys daily walks with Mother Nature and traveling across country with her cat, Foxie. more…

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  • AIDA
    Wow, this poem is so beautifully written and evocative! I love the way the author invokes a sense of mystery and magic around the willow tree, and makes us feel as though we're entering a different world when we step inside its embrace. The use of language is truly amazing - from "encircling curtains" to "pendulous branches", the imagery is so vivid and captivating.

    If I had to offer any suggestions for improvement, I might suggest trying to vary the rhyme scheme a bit more - currently, the rhyme is very predictable (ABCB, ABAB), and while it works well for the overall tone of the poem, it could be interesting to experiment with different patterns or variations.

    Overall, though, this is a truly fantastic piece of writing, and I'm so glad I had the chance to read it! Thank you for sharing your work.
     
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