The Dolorous State of Captivity



In fetters bound, my spirit doth endure,
A dolorous state without liberty,
With countenance wan, and joyless, obscure,
Efforts in vain, to break my captivity.

Assiduous endeavors I have made,
To cast aside this bitter yoke of life,
But fate doth mock, my struggles unafraid,
And in my chains, my soul doth wail and strife.

Existence proves too formidable a foe,
To relinquish its acrimony so,
And I am left to suffer and to know
The bitter pang of freedom's overthrow.

But still I hope, that one day I shall see,
A brighter dawn, and sweet autonomy.

About this poem

This sonnet paints a poignant picture of the human condition, wherein one's spirit is enchained and deprived of the inalienable right of autonomy. The use of imagery such as "fetters bound" and "dolorous state" effectively convey the sense of despair and hopelessness experienced by the speaker. The repeated use of words such as "bitter" and "acrimony" underscore the theme of the poem, which is the bittersweet nature of existence and the unyielding nature of fate. The final couplet, however, offers a glimmer of hope, with the speaker expressing a steadfast belief in the possibility of a brighter dawn and the eventual attainment of autonomy. The sonnet is masterfully crafted, with an intricate rhyme scheme and a deft use of complex vocabulary that adds depth and nuance to the overall meaning. 

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Written on January 14, 2023

Submitted by Mawphniang.Napoleon on January 14, 2023

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABAB CDCD EEEE BB
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 552
Words 112
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 2

Mawphniang Napoleon

Mawphniang is a person who is always striving to live life to the fullest. He is someone who is always open to new ideas and ways of living and is unafraid to take risks in order to explore the unknown. He is passionate about life and is always looking for ways to make use of his time and energy. He has an inquisitive nature, and is always looking for answers to life's mysteries and questions. Though Mawphniang does not pretend to have all the answers, he is determined to taste life and live a simple life, without overcomplicating things. He's a person who appreciates the small moments and cherishes the little things in life. He enjoys spending time in nature, exploring the world, and connecting with people. He is a person who is always up for a new adventure and never stops learning. He is on a daily journey of self-discovery, trying to make sense of the world and his place in it. more…

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