The Sun in the Fog



The fog falls heavy and low today
Alas! I am the sudden burst of sunshine.
 I am bold, bright and beautiful
The foggy mist can’t dull my shine.

Like the sun, I dare shine bright
Bold, yellow and in all gold
Emitting light to all who cross my path
Also burns vehemently when stared at disdainfully.

Too flashy, showy or even gaudy?
 Foes will need more than dark brim shades
to protect from my audacious glare
As I turn the mist to  unbearable heat.

Like the sun, I rise without boarders
But cloudy naysayers call it pride
They try to stifle and black me out
Alas! I am the sun, created to shine, I rise above impediments and shine.

About this poem

It's an inspirational poem. It was written on a very foggy morning in Houston, TX. I was dressed in all sunny colors despite the gloomy day.

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Written on January 10, 2023

Submitted by Abbykesington on January 11, 2023

Modified on April 16, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XABA XXXB XXXX XXXA
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 639
Words 129
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4

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2 Comments
  • dougb.21370
    The shining is audacious optimism and novelty beaming through the doldrums, forcing the recollection and hope that light always has the final say. Always overcomes the darkness. Good stuff here Abby.
    LikeReply 11 year ago
    • Abbykesington
      I absolutely agree with you. Light always overcomes darkness. No matter how long it takes, light will shine through. Thanks for your comments. I hope you will enjoy reading my other poems.
      LikeReply1 year ago
    • dougb.21370
      will do kindred heart.
      LikeReply1 year ago
  • Teril
    Your words shine into my day, indeed like the sun breaking through the fog. Keep showing us your light!
    LikeReply1 year ago

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