Naked Soul

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  Charles2

  Raw Intense Piercing of the bonds which connect our souls With minds which cannot always find where it is they have come from much less where it is they have gone

  LikeReply7 months ago
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    Kaytee

    thanks for your feedback. This o e did come from a pretty raw place.

    LikeReply7 months ago
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  Symmetry58

  Speaking of your poetry, this is just beautiful. It's easy to tell when someone has that little extra edge to where they sense the proper words and phrases to utilize so that each line will cut as much as possible or move as deeply as is required. I've noticed with your poetry there are many lines worthy of highlighting which is the force that draws me forward to want to read more. I love depth. It compels me when I write. Sentiment is my #1 motivating factor when I write, as well as when I read. It appears to be yours as well.
  
  As for this piece, it was beautiful all the way to the end, but the last stanza, for me, is the best possible closing you could have constructed. Isn't poetry amazingly medicinal and gratifying though.
  
  "Each time I draw near to you my soul crashes into the rocks of a deserted sea and I am a little bit less than I was before" - So touching and beautiful. more »

  LikeReply 11 year ago
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    Kaytee

    Thanks so much. I appreciate the feedback. This one flowed out when I was a bit tipsy. Maybe that helps.

    LikeReply 11 year ago
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    Symmetry58

    Haha@a bit tipsy. Tipsy, for me, is a given regardless of not having tilted a bottle in eons. *hiccup*

    LikeReply 11 year ago