Unthrown Rocks



Bruised is a stoned body,

felt is each thrown rock.

A broken soul turns to stone,

though you refuse to throw them back.

Pleading becomes your heart,

a forgiving promise to yield.

Protecting yourself from the abuse,

battled has become your shield.

Just wanting to be heard,

please validate me and what’s inside.

Your pursuit behind an agenda,

step forth out, from behind.

Through recognizing my worth, my love,

defined more than your credit given.

I’ll allow all this to pass from me,

you are family, and already forgiven.

No sense throwing, a retaliating rock,

forgiveness shows a love that’s greater.

So, release your weighted burden,

not saving your rocks, for later.
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Written on December 13, 2022

Submitted by KLaufle on December 18, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme A B X X X C X C X X X X X D A D B E D E
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 694
Words 150
Stanzas 20
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1

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2 Comments
  • eHubbard
    It hits too close to home and I feel every word.
    LikeReply1 year ago
  • Philove
    I chose this poem because it's a beautiful, yet tough message of forgiveness. And I can relate, sitting around with all these rocks thrown and don't know what to do with them. Though, the natural instinct, is to throw them back and more, but the "Unthrown Rocks" message is to live by, including the ones doing the throwing. Great Job, very nice! 
    LikeReply1 year ago

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