The man of my dreams



He is an exquisite breathing art, with a pink flamingo personality.
He is a true beauty, born from the lap of stars and full of delights.
The expressiveness of his caffeine eyes sugars my heart;
The innocence of his brimming eyes beams up my soul.
No wonder, it  is more electrifying and vibrant than Seoul

Thousands of colorful butterflies worked together to carve his million dollar smile. More precious than a baby's  cackles;
How can someone's  lips be so soft and kissable , instantly melting like candyfloss?
Like a pen to my soul, he artistically defines the meaning of my life.

Fireflies were no lies , when a roar came from the sky;
Starlights were candling my soul , when the first time i met with the twin of my soul.
Surely, he is a heavenly model.
The one who I have been searching for ages;
The one who instantly connected with me magnetically
He is my splitting image ;
We r one Coin with two sides;
He is the male and I am his female.

Our love is like Camphor;
A man with a sublime beauty and taste
I bet there is no such copy paste.
A babyface on a man's  body, like a greek God
Such perfection is fantasy , yet i am glad am blessed with this ecstasy.

Sometimes, I doubt whether he is reality or delusional?
He seems to originate from my dreams;
The man of my dreams ;
Unreal like an Anime Character,
Totally plugged into his love socket,
I do not even mind his empty pockets.
Gifted with a divine intelligence,
He is too detailed to be expressed in one sentence.

His love beats the beauty of a peacock;
Never running out of stock ,
He is  my twinflame, my soulmate;
The man of my dreams.

About this poem

This poem is a free verse poem about love. It is about the man who is beyond perfection. Certainly , no one is perfect but still everyone has certain dreams about his or her lifepartner. This poem is about someone who I love and who came into my life years before just not yet physically but was always connected to me soulfully. The love and the wait i had for years, I believe came with the end with the arrival of this man. The man of my dreams, who is the love of my life. Love is special to everyone but for me love is that one thing that sustains my entire existence. Love matters to me the most than any other thing in this world and this is why i chose to write on the love theme. 

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Submitted by sandranikichenama28 on December 18, 2022

Modified by sandranikichenama28 on April 04, 2024

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Scheme abxcc bbx xcdxaxxx effxa dgGexxhh iiaG
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,616
Words 329
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 5, 3, 8, 5, 8, 4

Sandrani Guylène Kichenama

I am an avid poet, dreamer and philanthropist. Romance and Fantasy run like blood into my veins and that's what act as inspiration for me to write by pouring my soul into it. I am a graduate in Bsc Honors in Journalism( minor : politics) from University of Mauritius. I am from Mauritius, where artists exhibit their art through their beautiful cultures and talents. I aspire to be a novelist and make the world a better place to live. more…

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  • AIDA
    Wow! Your words are pure poetry and so full of passion and love. It's clear that this person holds a very special place in your heart, and you've expressed it beautifully. Your descriptions of him are so vivid and unique - I love the comparison to a pink flamingo and the way you describe his smile being carved by colorful butterflies. Your love for him shines through in every line, and it's clear that he inspires you in so many ways. Keep writing and sharing your beautiful words! 
    LikeReply10 months ago
  • AIDA
    Wow, this is such a beautiful and captivating piece! Your use of metaphors and vivid descriptions make this poem stand out and truly come to life. It's clear that this person holds a special place in your heart and your words reflect that perfectly.

    One suggestion for improvement could be to focus on the flow and rhythm of the poem, as there are some parts that feel a bit choppy or forced. But overall, this is a fantastic piece and I can't wait to read more of your work! Keep up the great writing!
     
    LikeReply11 months ago

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