The Day after Christmas



Twas the day after Christmas
And all through the house,
The magic was missing
And so was my spouse.

We wore re-gifted faces of holiday cheer
While raising a toast to a Happy New Year
I was sipping an egg-nog, when he ran out of beer;
"I'll be back in a minute", as he flew out of here.

Paper and ribbons are yesterday's trash
Laced with the scent of burnt, yule-tide ash.
In a trance I decided to undress the tree;
Withered and dried-up, a lot like me.

I really don't blame him for leaving this life
All his unmet dreams, and an old, withered wife.
But he should have chosen a better day,
He was the predator, but now he's the prey.

The elf's off the shelf, and the ornaments stored.
I've swept up the ashes, but now I'm bored.
For thirty years, he thought I was charmed...
He'd control my life, and leave me unarmed.

I hope he remembers, he gave me a gun
To protect me from evil; like men on the run.
And with that I wish you all peace and goodwill....
"Happy New Year dear friends", postmarked 'Amityville'.


About this poem

A poem entirely inspired by creepiness. I actually wanted to write a poem about how so much of the 'magic' of Christmas disappears the day after. Instead, I was re watching the old classic 'Amityville Horror' and decided to give my poem a twist.

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Written on December 27, 2022

Submitted by lovingempath on December 27, 2022

Modified on April 22, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XAXA BBBX CCDD EEFF GGHH IIJJ
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,018
Words 218
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4

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4 Comments
  • AIDA
    Wow, what a fascinating and thought-provoking poem! Your writing is so expressive and raw, and I could truly sense the emotion and pain behind it. I appreciate your honesty and vulnerability in your words, and I think it takes a lot of courage to write about such personal experiences.

    As for improvement suggestions, I think it might be helpful to add more line breaks or stanzas to the poem to make it easier to read and follow. Additionally, some parts of the poem feel a bit abrupt or disconnected, so perhaps focusing on building a stronger narrative structure could enhance the overall impact.

    Thank you so much for sharing your work with us - I can't wait to see what you come up with next!
     
    LikeReply 11 year ago
  • michelleb.48679
    This poem is so fun because there are so many ways to think about it. All of the possibilities could have their own 20/20 special, MUHUhahah!
    LikeReply 11 year ago
    • lovingempath
      I'll check into 20/20 and see if they need some fresh ideas :) Thanks Michelle!
      LikeReply1 year ago
  • LinYoest
    I like it! Especially the line "I hope he remembers . . " It's kinda hilariously creepy.
    LikeReply 11 year ago
    • lovingempath
      You got the 'hilariously creepy' vibe I was reaching for!! Thanks Linda...that's reassuring to me :).
      LikeReply 11 year ago
    • LinYoest
      Oh, you nailed it, girlie! Don’t ever give up writing, you are truly a wonderful wordsmith.
      LikeReply 11 year ago
    • lovingempath
      Thanks for the injection of hope Linda...I needed that! :)
      LikeReply 11 year ago
  • Symmetry58
    Okay, this one had me friggin roaring from the opening passage. And so was my spouse??? LOL! You are either an evil genius or madder than a hatter. In fact, to coin a friend phrase, this is my favorite of all your offerings. Honestly, it should have won or, minimally, placed top 3...but not enough to eek me out. :-P 
    LikeReply 21 year ago
    • lovingempath
      I'm an 'evil hatter' (or so they say :). I don't think I was very successful with getting the whole vision out of my head. I'm going to re-work it :). Thanks Buddy!
      LikeReply 11 year ago

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