A Familiar Place



1.
i'm passing through this path again
where we stopped to look each other in the eyes.
we smiled, seeing something different in them.

2.
we made promises and dreamt of forever
surrounded by the smell of rotting mangoes and harmattan breeze.

4.
we wrapped secrets in guava leaves
bearing our autographs
and weaved saliva into memories.

3. i.
i was fire and you were arctic.
this was the altar where we died.

  ii.
i felt you melt icy in my shaking arms
when i mistakenly tore your amulet:
i was afraid
but you begged me to never let go.

...

4.
it's been nine years now.
and i came here to remember;
but everywhere and everyone's changed.

5.
we're changed.

About this poem

Just a few lines recollecting a significant experience, which has an enduring effect on the persona as he sees into memory lane.

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Written on March 12, 2022

Submitted by mrnnachijoshua on December 27, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme axxx abc Axxc dxx dxxxx Axbe ae
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 662
Words 146
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 4, 3, 4, 3, 5, 4, 2

Joshua Ibe Nnachi

A post-graduate, English Language, I write poetry as a means of escapism. I hail from Afikpo South in Ebonyi State. more…

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