i loved you there

I loved you there,  
when dreams and reality
agreed to be enslaved  
empire of pride crumbles down mutually ....  
for your fill

Back through the alley....  
navigating suicidal tendencies...  
it killed the will and emptied the soul...  
unplugged survival...  
showing the way to
to bury myself therewith  
the fallen lost villain soldiers
that never made it,
insanity reading a eulogy ...  

I'm in debt for what I’ve accepted
price of flavors
lost between eyebrows  
and the tip of your nose

too much heaven to be seen  
crimes can be forgiven,
but not forgotten, 
it’s not longevity that measures...  
but the worth you make it  
at the end of this life, I chose ....  
such a short path ....

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the staring point, accepting consequences

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Written on November 07, 2022

Submitted by azdi404 on January 02, 2023

Modified by azdi404 on March 20, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 724
Words 137
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 5, 9, 4, 7


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