Grievance of a young heart...



Decided from the start..
He told his heart..
To keep out of his way
That fellow is naive for that drifting thought...
That came across his stay...
That one smile she gave to him
Paved a lovely way...
At class he was out
For the instant counts
Lost in thinking fray,
Bored with life he had just found
Another reason for to pray...

Crushing so hard he made out far
Rushing adrenaline to blame...
With wits so vast...
He planned at last...
The confession for her, to say
She heard him out...
And made shout out
Her bold persona to blame
That moment was all...
To shatter the thought
He realised, though quite late...

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Nothing but usual life of a ontrovert school boy in love for the nth time...

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Submitted by Risingstar4397 on December 30, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme AABCBXBDXBXB XEFFBDDEXCX
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 623
Words 128
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 12, 11

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