Rhyming rains on dancing days



When all the things go right
the day stays all the way humble,
When everything goes silent
all the days go numb,
when no one goes high
all day it gets dumb,
when no one cares or of all cheers
the day gets into a state of a mob,
when all the stupidity is seen
by rain, the day's interest succumbs,
the day asking itself, whether rain
rhymes based on my moments or otherwise,
knowing this the day keeps on testing the
rains whether they rhyme or not every day!

About this poem

A Day questioning itself waiting for the rains to rhyme with itself and give relief or pleasure to get through tragic previous days it had or its experience with the volatile human world.

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Submitted by mpriyatham2000 on December 28, 2022

Modified by mpriyatham2000 on April 25, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCDEDFGHIJKLM
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 460
Words 98
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 14

Mudavath Priyatham Naik

Final Year UG student, Electrical Engineering, IIT Kharagpur, India. more…

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