so strong against me didn't win



a glass of water
or a cup of coffee
could have saved the towers of
only I am always taken from falsely attached men
that never leave me my own identity of
they live to bash me
and remove my pants and shirt
and swear I'm running naked
and can be their bound to jerk
the world don't spin to kill me
and my right to marry
was more then an evil man
his wife died
and it came out of london
for interfering with my life plan
he could have had his live
if his men didn't interfere with mine with me within
now he can enjoy as much as he did
interfering with mine and he canlive without his love too
wife without shouldn't have did to me
I'd rather your wife lived
just like I wanted mine to live with me
the world didn't spin for killing what I live to be in
a wife with my care yet true and this man is a separate thinker too
shouldn't have killed me and my house with my mother
I'm not a nomad
and other brothers
all my time wasn't and isn't yours
easy to come out of London
instead of a plan to detour
my world never spins into yours
it's easy to kill
and never easy to live
I am not a sad attempt at a race card that didn't win
besides I was ready to let a black man sing my songs
and let the forces win
the world didn't spin
for a lack of my woman with me
I didn't begin
so save your hypnotist and punish me
on all yours against me yet couldn't win
at least with me the world had a chance
to don't lose their pants

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mother and girlfriend supported from my writer's life

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Written on December 21, 2022

Submitted by xspert on December 21, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme ABCDCBEFGBBHIJHKLMNBOBLNAPQRJSRTKLULLBLBLVW
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,414
Words 298
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 43

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