O"Guava let's talk

Mian Ahad 2003 (Faisalabad)



O" Guava I am here
Let's have some talk for a while
Would you???
Look at me I wanna talk .......

O" Guava! that world is like you
As you covered hard seeds inside you weather they are beneficial or not.......
This world have iron people too... that cause cruelty.....beneficial to break other things, but not for himself

O" Guava look at yourself..
You're beautiful from outside but have undigestable seeds.... that are harmful
Just like the world if you will go deeper you will be beat....

O" Guava look at yourself
As you are hard from outside...but you have soft inner side
Like men who looks like angry bird but are soft_hearted ...

O" Guava I am tired  ....
This world has disappointed me...
Let's have some talk
Why you won't become my partner???
Yes! You can ...if can't
So become my food

O" Guava this world is like me
They double-cross you.....never wait for you ....just gives you a command and you've to obey them...

O"Guava please! have some talk with me
I'm alone no-one is here.. ..
Please share my loneliness
Why you didn't give me any reply.....
O" Guava you proved  you are also part of this world
Why you would give benefit to anyone??

About this poem

I portrayed about lack of attention in Relationships and friendships as well as loneliness of a man.

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Written on September 12, 2022

Submitted by mianmushahad on December 09, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme axbc bde Exx Exd xfcxxx fx faxxxx
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,170
Words 237
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 4, 3, 3, 3, 6, 2, 6

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I'm from Faisalabad and first kid of my family .I belongs to a middle class family. more…

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