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Hospital Sunrise

Kaci Tami 1960 (Vatukoula)

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Hospital Sunrise
The rising sun
sneaks in behind the slim blinds
casting dappled gold on my cold curtained enclosure
I awake to find it warming my mottled body
Enclosed in sterile white sheets
Ready for embalming or so it feels
I try to extricate myself from my white prison
But find me myself unable to
The tangled sheets confine me
I am unable to rise
So, I simply slacken and remain supine
And watch the sunrise
Casting dappled gold shadows
On the walls of my hospital room
4 South, Ward 10, Bed 3

About this poem

This poem documents my experience while in hospital recovering from a brain tumour operation

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Written on August 17, 2008

Submitted by taminator2016 on December 09, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCDEFGBHEAIAJKL
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 503
Words 96
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 16
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Kaci Tami

I am an aspiring writer, poet, teller of tales that is me. I have always seen things in a different light and from my perspective, it gives you an insight into what makes me tick as a human being. My life is always hectic and the most important thing I have learnt is that there are three things that one should value in life (a) Your loved ones (b)Your health (c) The memories you create with people. In the end, we all leave this world alone, so spend time creating memories and meaningful relationships with individuals and society at large. My poems reflect my perspective on the world at large both real and imagined. I am in the process of collating an anthology of poems so I can share my likes, dislikes and life with others. Thank you for reading my poems more…

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