Raining in my Heart



Feel so good
When cool wind embraces me
Chill is the day
And chill is our way
Searchin’ for someone for warmth
Rainin’ unseasonally
Inside and outside

My heart is wet
My eyes hesitate
To pour that out
My face being soaked up
Of things huge being dumped inside
But happy on seeing
Pouring rains out

No worries of water
For sometime
Still Indian vessels
Beg for alms
At the Corporation vehicles
It is an everyday sight
How long this prevails?

About this poem

Water scarcity beyond rains.

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Submitted by davidsonprabu on December 06, 2022

Modified on March 25, 2023

24 sec read
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Quick analysis:

Scheme XXAAXXB XXCXBXC XXDXDXX
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 446
Words 83
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 7, 7, 7

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