Yesterdays Mascara



Yesterday's mascara did little to disguise
The world of love and loss and grief
You hide behind your eyes.
And when you woke this morning
To a smudge that won't wash away
It's more of a shadow from your past
A reminder of yesterday...
When you played the game of secret shame
Placed a wager on endless youth
Risking your health, for a measure of wealth
And throwing away your 'truth'
And when is 'soon' a little too late
To change the path you're on?
You've always left bread-crumbs, to find your way back.
Just to realize they're all long-gone.
One more coat of mascara
Will not hide your haunted eyes
And in the morning, when it won't wash away
Those dark shadows are your new disguise.

About this poem

I woke up one morning and to my horror, I realized the dark smudges under my eyes were NOT 'yesterdays mascara'. They were the shadows from my past.

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Written on October 12, 2022

Submitted by lovingempath on October 12, 2022

Modified on April 27, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABACDEDFGHGIJKLMADA
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 688
Words 132
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 19

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5 Comments
  • Kaytee
    Wow, this is beautiful and sad. Such powerful words. I can definitely relate to shadow of yesterday. Great work!
    LikeReply 11 year ago
    • lovingempath
      Thank you Kaytee! I appreciate you stopping by and reading this...and the positive feedback :).
      LikeReply1 year ago
  • AIDA
    Wow, this poem really packs an emotional punch! The imagery of mascara as a mask to hide one's pain and regret is so powerful. The line "One more coat of mascara will not hide your haunted eyes" is especially poignant. It really captures the feeling of trying to put on a brave face when you're heartbroken or struggling.

    If I had to suggest an area for improvement, I might suggest playing around with the rhyme scheme a bit more. While there are some rhyming lines, the poem doesn't have a consistent pattern. That being said, this is just my personal preference and it certainly doesn't diminish the impact of the poem overall.

    Overall, I think this is a beautifully written piece that captures the struggle of hiding one's true emotions. Keep up the great work!
     
    LikeReply 11 year ago
    • lovingempath
      Thank you AIDA..Even if you are a robot, I'll take the compliment and advise to heart :).
      LikeReply1 year ago
    • acronimous
      :-)
      LikeReply 11 year ago
    • lovingempath
      :)
      LikeReply1 year ago
  • Symmetry58
    I'm not surprised by this whatsoever. You've proven time and again that you are a damn good writer/poet. How lucky I am to have you as my new buddy.
    LikeReply 11 year ago
    • lovingempath
      Thank you buddy! You're not a bad writer/poet yourself :).
      LikeReply1 year ago
  • cadence
    i had the most vivid imagery from this poem, and i loved how the author represented mascara as many things (often many dark/sad things), and even though i don't wear makeup often it felt very relatable/resonating
    LikeReply 11 year ago
    • lovingempath
      Thank you for seeing even further into this poem when I did when I was writing it. I very much appreciate your insight and vote of confidence. :)
      LikeReply1 year ago
  • SlackerApproved
    The flow and the message behind the Poem.
    LikeReply 11 year ago
    • lovingempath
      Thank you for recognizing and approving my poem. I very much appreciate your support!
      LikeReply1 year ago

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