Until I die

Undergroundpoet 1983 (Arkansas)



I promise to love you hold you and keep you safe from the dark.

I promise today you have the  Final  piece of my heart.

I promise to love you with every breath I  Breathe.

I promise to be a good Christian man to you and to never leave.

I promise I will love you for richer or for poor.

If our love shall fall I promise to restore.

I promise I will love you with every inch of my faith.

I promise the love I give you you'll never want to replace.

 I promise I will love you with every blood sweat and tear.

I promise together there's nothing in this world we will fear.

I promise to love you and never make your heart cry.

I promise to be there for you until I die.

About this poem

This poem is what I want to say to my Future wife. So you can say I wrote my own Vows

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Written on March 09, 2011

Submitted by UndergroundPoet on October 27, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme X X X X X X X X X X A A
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 676
Words 159
Stanzas 12
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1

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